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here's another pice of poetry i wrote a while back , ENJOY.

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Post  Kiiro_Hayai on Sun Nov 11, 2012 7:04 am

SEVEN DAY BATTLE

from the depths of hell
he shall return
slaying all and watching them burn
out of his mouth comes a mighty roar
as he strikes you down with his mighty sword
as the end is near
and all is lost
one rises up and stops his blow
filled with hope for the next day
he stands to fight as they pray
all night and day
through morning to dusk
the battle rages on with out any luck
on the seventh day as all seems lost
they both draw there swords
and then they stuck
blood flew down like a water fall
as they hit the ground with a mighty bound
demon and hero both were dead
thus ends the battle
that we all know well
and also ends my sad tale
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Post  #009 on Sun Nov 11, 2012 1:23 pm

I really like your Poetry, #025 ^_^
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thanks

Post  Kiiro_Hayai on Sun Nov 11, 2012 2:44 pm

i means so much to me when someone likes my poetry and its even more meaningful when that person tells me. THANKS Very Happy
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Post  #009 on Mon Nov 12, 2012 12:42 am

I don't mind you posting your poetry, I actually encourage you to post more of it! XD
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