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here's s a pice of poetry i wrote a while back , ENJOY.

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here's s a pice of poetry i wrote a while back , ENJOY.

Post  Kiiro_Hayai on Sat Nov 10, 2012 10:06 am

rings of hell
nine all together
death and despair was the seventh
torture and pain was the eighth
but the worst of all was the last
even satin feared its grasp
disappear the ninth ring did
heaven too lost some room
they both take blame for what happened that day
I was born
man what a shame
the bit of heaven kept the beast bound
the bounds grow weaker as i grew
anger and pain filled my life
as the anger bubbles
and the pain dose grow
the beast will escape
and on that day
all hell will brake loose
my dearest friend as this may be true
lets just hope
that the beast
will not be released
onto you
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Re: here's s a pice of poetry i wrote a while back , ENJOY.

Post  #009 on Sat Nov 10, 2012 2:11 pm

Brilliant, deep, brood-worthy... I can engage in the emotions deep in the literature. Thank you for sharing, and I hope to see more,
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